Narrative Structure

 

  Narrative Structure and History in the Writings of Nephi


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The scripture we know as 2 Nephi 5 was originally 2 Nephi 4 in the 1830 edition of the Book of Mormon. The numbering of the chapter is not necessarily significant, but the fact that while other chapters were restructured in the versified edition, our 2 Nephi 5 was not. In both the first edition, and the most recent, this chapter is presented as a redactive whole. This is precisely as it should be, because 2 Nephi 5 forms a complete redactive unit.

The separateness of this chapter from our current chapters 4 and 6 are illustrative of the completeness of chapter 5 as a unit. The "boundary verses" are:

2 Nephi 4:34

34 O Lord, I have trusted in thee, and I will trust in thee forever. I will not put my trust in the arm of flesh; for I know that cursed is he that putteth his trust in the arm of flesh. Yea, cursed is he that putteth his trust in man or maketh flesh his arm.

2 Nephi 4:35

35 Yea, I know that God will give liberally to him that asketh. Yea, my God will give me, if I ask not amiss; therefore I will lift up my voice unto thee; yea, I will cry unto thee, my God, the rock of my righteousness. Behold, my voice shall forever ascend up unto thee, my rock and mine everlasting God. Amen.

Chapter 5

2 Nephi 5:1

1 Behold, it came to pass that I, Nephi, did cry much unto the Lord my God, because of the anger of my brethren.

2 Nephi 5:2

2 But behold, their anger did increase against me, insomuch that they did seek to take away my life.

While the beginning of chapter 5 presents a neat literary connection to the end of chapter 4, the subject matters of the two chapters are completely different. Chapter 4 is Nephi's psalm, and the text is concerned with spiritual issues, and only tangentially about the history of his people. On the other hand, chapter 5 is a return to narrative history. It is a remarkable history in that only important highlights are given, and information we might dearly love to have has been left out.

2 Nephi 5 is a remarkably parallel to 1 Nephi 17:1- 6 . It is parallel not in content, but in the terseness of the relation of history:

1 Nephi 17:1

1 AND it came to pass that we did again take our journey in the wilderness; and we did travel nearly eastward from that time forth. And we did travel and wade through much affliction in the wilderness; and our women did bear children in the wilderness.

1 Nephi 17:2

2 And so great were the blessings of the Lord upon us, that while we did live upon raw meat in the wilderness, our women did give plenty of suck for their children, and were strong, yea, even like unto the men; and they began to bear their journeyings without murmurings.

1 Nephi 17:3

3 And thus we see that the commandments of God must be fulfilled. And if it so be that the children of men keep the commandments of God he doth nourish them, and strengthen them, and provide means whereby they can accomplish the thing which he has commanded them; wherefore, he did provide means for us while we did sojourn in the wilderness.

1 Nephi 17:4

4 And we did sojourn for the space of many years, yea, even eight years in the wilderness.

1 Nephi 17:5

5 And we did come to the land which we called Bountiful, because of its much fruit and also wild honey; and all these things were prepared of the Lord that we might not perish. And we beheld the sea, which we called Irreantum, which, being interpreted, is many waters.

1 Nephi 17:6

6 And it came to pass that we did pitch our tents by the seashore; and notwithstanding we had suffered many afflictions and much difficulty, yea, even so much that we cannot write them all, we were exceedingly rejoiced when we came to the seashore; and we called the place Bountiful, because of its much fruit.

In 1 Nephi 17:1-6, a long period of time is reduced to very few sentences. In fact, we have the historically blank verse 4, where we learn that they spent eight years in the wilderness - and nothing at all about those eight years!

With so little information for such a long period of time, virtually matched by the relative paucity of historical information for the period after the arrival in the New World, what can we learn of Nephi's writing, and in particular the structural units he used to mark his writing, and the function of history in his text?

The boundary verses between 2 Nephi 5 and 2 Nephi 6 tell us something of Nephi's writing process:

2 Nephi 5:33

33 And if my people desire to know the more particular part of the history of my people they must search mine other plates.

2 Nephi 5:34

34 And it sufficeth me to say that forty years had passed away, and we had already had wars and contentions with our brethren.

Chapter 6

2 Nephi 6:1

1 THE words of Jacob, the brother of Nephi, which he spake unto the people of Nephi:

Chapter 5 is a synoptic history, and chapter 6 begins with a very abrupt change not only in content, but in locutor. Without any further literary transition than the blunt statement of 2 Nephi 6:1, Nephi simply begins recounting sermons of his brother, Jacob. In what follows there is no story line, no history, no real narrative. What we have in 2 Nephi chapters 6-10 is a record of a sermon.

The transition out of Jacob and into Isaiah is not nearly so abrupt, but still occurs with little attempt to make a transition:

2 Nephi 11:1

1 AND now, Jacob spake many more things to my people at that time; nevertheless only these things have I caused to be written, for the things which I have written sufficeth me.

2 Nephi 11:2

2 And now I, Nephi, write more of the words of Isaiah, for my soul delighteth in his words. For I will liken his words unto my people, and I will send them forth unto all my children, for he verily saw my Redeemer, even as I have seen him.

Once the sermon ended in 10, Nephi makes no more of a reference to it that to say (in 2 Nephi 11:1) that Jacob had other sermons. The transition in verse 2 is an abrupt change of locutor again, leaving the New World entirely, and returning to the Old World prophet Isaiah.

Particularly in 2 Nephi, it is easier to see where Nephi is making narrative breaks. Clearly there is a narrative break between the synoptic history of chapter 5 and the Jacobean sermons of chapters 6-10. Likewise, there is a narrative break between Jacob's sermon and the beginning of the Isaiah chapters.

Returning to chapter 5, the break for the previous chapter, and the dating information included in the chapter suggest that it was written as a unit. We know that Nephi did not begin writing on the small plates until thirty years after the departure from Jerusalem (2 Nephi 5:28-29). Clearly when Nephi began the work of writing on the plates, he began with what we have in 1 Nephi 1. Therefore by the time this particular section is being written, it should be long after those earlier chapters. Chapter 5 is also written by forty years after the departure from Jerusalem, a statement that comes only six short verses after the thirty year marker (verse 34). It appears, from the synoptic nature of chapter 5, the clear breaks between 4/5 and 5/6, that 2 Nephi 5 was written as an entire unit - perhaps at a single sitting. While we don't know how long it would have taken Nephi to write on the plates, and that is certainly a constraining factor, were that not a complete barrier, the structure of 2 Nephi chapters 4-6 are very suggestive that chapter 5 is a unit written at a single sitting, a more or less complete thought for that day's (?) writing on the plates.

Another obvious narrative break occurs between the end of 1 Nephi and the beginning of 2 Nephi. The end of 1 Nephi is Nephi's exegesis on scripture pertaining to the future, and 2 Nephi 1 begins Lehi's blessings of his sons (again a change in the locutor). The break between the 1830 version chapter one and two of 1 Nephi (current 1 Nephi 5/6 break) is also a clear unit marker:

1 Nephi 5:21

21 And we had obtained the records which the Lord had commanded us, and searched them and found that they were desirable; yea, even of great worth unto us, insomuch that we could preserve the commandments of the Lord unto our children.

1 Nephi 5:22

22 Wherefore, it was wisdom in the Lord that we should carry them with us, as we journeyed in the wilderness towards the land of promise.

Chapter 6

1 Nephi 6:1

1 AND now I, Nephi, do not give the genealogy of my fathers in this part of my record; neither at any time shall I give it after upon these plates which I am writing; for it is given in the record which has been kept by my father; wherefore, I do not write it in this work.

1 Nephi 6:2

2 For it sufficeth me to say that we are descendants of Joseph.

There is a shift in the text from the narrative of the story of the obtaining of the plates, and the next literary unit begins with a reference to the previous section, but an interjection by Nephi that does not continue the narrative, but rather explains that he intends not to continue such a narrative:

1 Nephi 6:3

3 And it mattereth not to me that I am particular to give a full account of all the things of my father, for they cannot be written upon these plates, for I desire the room that I may write of the things of God.

The examination of the literary unit boundaries in Nephi's writings leads to some interesting conclusions about the process by which Nephi's small plate texts were constructed.

  1. While it is obvious to say so, Nephi did not write the entire text in a single sitting. While there are some long sections (such as the explication of Nephi's vision of the Tree of Life) which were probably written in different sittings, the units cannot be discerned. Still, there are yet many units which clearly show the evidence of what Nephi considered a complete unit, and when he was done with a particular textual element.
  2. For most of his writings, Nephi would re-read the preceding section, and create some kind of transition from one unit to another.
  3. At some points, Nephi gave up on even that much of a pretense of literary precision, and simply started something new (such as the very abrupt beginning to 2 Nephi 6)
  4. As indicated in my introduction to 2 Nephi, the gross conceptual break between 1 Nephi and 2 Nephi had to do with the spiritual history of Nephi himself, which is the main focus of 1 Nephi. After 1 Nephi closes, Nephi has written most of what he wanted to say about himself, and he never returns to the type of narration of 1 Nephi during the text of 2 Nephi. 2 Nephi begins as a record of his father's words.
  5. Chapter 5 appears to mark the close of the planned part of Nephi's text. Very clearly all of 1 Nephi is calculated. 2 Nephi 1-3 appear to also be part of the planned text.
  6. Chapter 4 is the Psalm of Nephi, and appears to be a personal moment triggered by the writings of his father. I would suggest that the Psalm was not a planned text, but a nearly spontaneous outpouring of his feelings that made it into print because the occurred while he was writing.
  7. Chapter 5 is a summary chapter that catches Nephi up to the present. At this point in time, Nephi has finished what he planned to write. He is "caught up" to date, after having to cover forty years that had passed.
  8. The abrupt change to Jacob's words in chapter 6, and the inclusion of Isaiah, were not part of Nephi's original plans to write, but are the result of what must (over the ten year period of time between the command to make the small plates and the "catching up" point) have become a very personal experience with the writing on the plates. Having completed what he wanted to say, Nephi, records things that are of particular personal interest, rather than a text with a particular external focus.

The very last point that is important to make is the nature of "history" in Nephi's writings. There are clearly historical sketches, such as the return for the plates and the building of the ship, but those pieces of "history" occur only because they are the narrative structure onto which Nephi hangs the real important information, the story of his spiritual development. In Nephi, there is very little regard for "history" as we would have in a Western tradition. What passes for "history" is subservient to a larger purpose, which is the spiritual reason for the small plates. Any question about this subservience of history is completely answered by Nephi himself as he is temporarily "finishing" his record at the end of chapter 5: "2 Nephi 5:33 And if my people desire to know the more particular part of the history of my people they must search mine other plates." Nephi is explicit, if you want history, go somewhere else. You won't find it here.

Thus we must understand as we read Nephi that many of the very important historical questions that we would love to have answered are not there because Nephi had no reason to write them.

At this point in the narrative, as we proceed to chapter 6, it is also interesting to speculate that Nephi had "finished" his writing at the end of chapter 5, and that what we get from now on is of a very different character.

       
      by Brant Gardner. Copyright 1998